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92. All That I Have (shush, it's close enough to the theme xD)

Yes. Done. Hahahaha.

:heart:

I'm actually really proud of this. xD It could use some tweaking here and there, but I feel like this thing which is practically a huge metaphor can go places (like my memory stick, to collect digital dust.. *sigh*).

The metaphors speak to me, man. Ever since I started writing poetry, it's been affecting my prose. And now I see life figuratively. O_o Damn.

But. I'm not that great a writer and connot communicate the thoughts in my head very well. xD Like, every single sentence in this thing makes sense and has some sort of significance... in my head.

I'd love critique. Comments. Whatever. Hell, tell me what you interpreted the whole thing as meaning. Yeah. Right.

There's probably some horrible verb tense mistake in there. ^^;

Daily Deviation

Given 2009-07-05

Dine with Death by ~ToaAkatsuki characterizes Death in such a human-like, almost endearing light. Read as two characters dine through an unexpected finish. (Suggested by ~scheherazadenerai and Featured by ^fllnthblnk)

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:iconhillsofmyst:
aaaaaaaaah.
this.
is.
so.
darn.
epic.
you rock.
submit it to that thingy or die.
i'll invite death.
yeah.
cool.
kthxbai.

--
DO NOT CLICK [link]

Life is not about how you survived the storm ;
but how you danced in the rain.
:icontoaakatsuki:
What if I get rejected? D:
lmao.
hey, dA wouldn't count as ';previously published', would it? O_o
lol, I could always remove it if it becomes a problem xD
I think I shall.
And I will waste school ink too.
BUT WHAT IF THERE'S SOME HORRIBLY STUPID GRAMMAR MISTAKE?! *hyperventilates*

...I wonder if my English teacher likes me enough to proofread for me... >.<

I love you. Thank you. :hug: *freaking out over nothing xD*

--
The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi

~ShortStackStories
~Amaranth-Portal
=RawEm0tion
:iconhillsofmyst:
i..dunknow..
..so what happened to having to go? you lyarrr..
SO LOOK OVER IT, GAWSH
IT'S VERY SIMPLE.
JEEZ.
♪hallelujah..

--
DO NOT CLICK [link]

Life is not about how you survived the storm ;
but how you danced in the rain.
:icontoaakatsuki:
lol. I SHALL. :salute:

--
The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi

~ShortStackStories
~Amaranth-Portal
=RawEm0tion
:iconchrysanthe-al:
wow, i really like this!
though i think you should try and watch your use of adjectives--sometimes less is more.
but the ideas are wonderful. i really like it. :+fav:
:icontokyo-empress:
I love this. It is amazing. :)
:icontoaakatsuki:
thank you :bow:

--
The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi

~ShortStackStories
~Amaranth-Portal
=RawEm0tion
:icontoaakatsuki:
mm, you think? I'm actually just too lazy to explain things so I try to do it with adjectives. xD I swear they usually have a purpose. lol.

thanks for the fav!

--
The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi

~ShortStackStories
~Amaranth-Portal
=RawEm0tion
:iconchrysanthe-al:
you're very welcome.

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